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Page 5, FOR THOSE WHO WANT TO SEE PAGE 4 VISIT THIS LINK:
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That should avert any confusion this time. Hopefully.
First thing I will say is that I know this page turned out odd, the pacing is weird and the action in the first panel especially is confusing. That, I'm finding out, is the problem with these back-and-forth comic things, there isn't enough time to use proper pacing or to plan stuff out because you only have control over every other page.
It's not that bad, it's still fun and I will admit that FIGHT was really only planned about two or three pages in advance.
I tried about four variations ranging between one and four panels and nothing worked. I could only use the top row because I needed the rest of the page for the transformation so what ends up happening is the actions bleeds together and gets quite confused. For those wondering, Quarma shoots a ball of energy at me which I dodge by being super fast and awesome, and then I poke him in the side of his head, initiating the transformation. For those wondering "wtf", the "poke and peel" attack was used first in FIGHT.
the Poke: [link]
and the Peel: [link]
A quick and easy way to do a transformation so I can fit it all semi- comfortably in one page.
The second thing I'll say is that I really like how this page turned out, considering. I was a little worried about it but the inking went great, I'm getting much better at controlling my line weight, and the editing went beautifully. I also like the design for asian schoolgirl Quarma, throughout this whole thing he's been trying to push a halloween theme and I think that kind of shows in the design, it ended up looking like an asian girl in costume. I dunno what else to say, I like it, I think it has a nice balance to it even if the first panel kind of pulls the quality down.
That's it, I think.
blue-lined, inked, photoshopped
Oh yeah, PLEASE COMMISSION ME! Guys common, the prices are reasonable, the cost of colour may have jumped but you can still get a decent black and white sequence, check out my Journal for the prices and send me a note if you're interested!
---------->> [link] <<----------
That should avert any confusion this time. Hopefully.
First thing I will say is that I know this page turned out odd, the pacing is weird and the action in the first panel especially is confusing. That, I'm finding out, is the problem with these back-and-forth comic things, there isn't enough time to use proper pacing or to plan stuff out because you only have control over every other page.
It's not that bad, it's still fun and I will admit that FIGHT was really only planned about two or three pages in advance.
I tried about four variations ranging between one and four panels and nothing worked. I could only use the top row because I needed the rest of the page for the transformation so what ends up happening is the actions bleeds together and gets quite confused. For those wondering, Quarma shoots a ball of energy at me which I dodge by being super fast and awesome, and then I poke him in the side of his head, initiating the transformation. For those wondering "wtf", the "poke and peel" attack was used first in FIGHT.
the Poke: [link]
and the Peel: [link]
A quick and easy way to do a transformation so I can fit it all semi- comfortably in one page.
The second thing I'll say is that I really like how this page turned out, considering. I was a little worried about it but the inking went great, I'm getting much better at controlling my line weight, and the editing went beautifully. I also like the design for asian schoolgirl Quarma, throughout this whole thing he's been trying to push a halloween theme and I think that kind of shows in the design, it ended up looking like an asian girl in costume. I dunno what else to say, I like it, I think it has a nice balance to it even if the first panel kind of pulls the quality down.
That's it, I think.
blue-lined, inked, photoshopped
Oh yeah, PLEASE COMMISSION ME! Guys common, the prices are reasonable, the cost of colour may have jumped but you can still get a decent black and white sequence, check out my Journal for the prices and send me a note if you're interested!
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Well, she sure turned out cute.
